There he was climbing down the Water Tower. Terrified, scared a boy with an old crumpled T-shirt on Bubba was in an anxious moment. Bubba was scared so Bubba screamed and shouted. He could only hear an echo so he moved up the ladder and then it was daylight so he climbed and climbed then he reached the top.
I was a scared shy girl. I followed them into the tower, funnily enough the sun kept on following me so I kept my thought to myself. They turned and ran after me. I ran but they kept on following me. I stumbled and tripped but on I went to the nearst tree and i hide behind the tree but when i came out it stil was following me so i went to the water tank and i climbed up the outside ladder and when i reached the top i falet like a bird sweaping and swooping with the wind caring me along then i saw a open hach so i walked closer and closer and then i looked into it
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Your writing does have an element of suspense. You have used short sentences effectively.
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