Friday, 17 October 2008

I strongly believe that Bubba shouldn't have left because Bubba was a weak valuable person and he was only 12 years old and how would you feel if you were left on your own?.

My first reason is that he could of die of the heat and he could of wall into the water tower and drowned and also it was a dandgous place as well he didn't have any,any shoes on so he could of had blisters ,grass stains and mud why did Bubba leave?. I want to argue that he shouldn't have left him on his own.

My second reason is that he had anit-sohsle behave and spike and could of be working for the water tower company and areared to kidnap Bubba while he was at the water tower walting for he to come back.

Sunday, 5 October 2008

Mantle Inspired Writing

There he was climbing down the Water Tower. Terrified, scared a boy with an old crumpled T-shirt on Bubba was in an anxious moment. Bubba was scared so Bubba screamed and shouted. He could only hear an echo so he moved up the ladder and then it was daylight so he climbed and climbed then he reached the top.

I was a scared shy girl. I followed them into the tower, funnily enough the sun kept on following me so I kept my thought to myself. They turned and ran after me. I ran but they kept on following me. I stumbled and tripped but on I went to the nearst tree and i hide behind the tree but when i came out it stil was following me so i went to the water tank and i climbed up the outside ladder and when i reached the top i falet like a bird sweaping and swooping with the wind caring me along then i saw a open hach so i walked closer and closer and then i looked into it